Feedback
Aesthetic- Realism of interview
- Improve mise en scene, the bag
- Nice music in background
- Good titles, and structure
- Mise en scene is a bit messy, improve the background
- I liked the name key thing style
- Improve mise en scene, the bag
- Personal approach, gave the look good as well as the question coming on it's on
Creativity
- Creative interview idea
- Not very adventurous but does the job
- Cut away creative shots
Technology
- Sound is incoherent
- Needed better quality cinematography
- Lip syncing not right
- Great technological use
- Audio wasn't synced
Understanding
- More statistics/facts needed
- Good well used interviewees, articulate
- More stats
- Good that interviewees were specialised in the field
- Articulate interviewees
- Gave a broad understanding
Production Values
- Out of sync sounds
- Sound was too low but camera work solid
- Sound went out of sync
- Sound levels needed more gain
- Sound wasn't clear
WWW
- Very good idea and editing
- Well structured, good questions, interesting production
- Good ideas, produced well
- Gave a personal approach which was interesting to watch and see what other people had to say about the internet
EBI
- Synced sound and needs factual statistics
- Voices weren't synced, and should have balance of genders
- Include a female interviewee
- Make sure you don't cut people off and maybe add shots of interviewees working
- Voices weren't synced, balance genders
- Could have added images with some of the things that they were talking about
